PhillySound: new poetry

chris that one is delicious! isn't this queer -- one i wrote a few yrs back, similar but in overt self-ridicule. don't recall ever reading 'displaced' ::



disunderstood


oh scary monster
sucking his paw
saliva’s fermented
long eyes down
christ too much hair
quiet wish to hang
pouting
than be among *them*

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but i really like buk's.
this is a perfect example of the self-conscious crap i mentioned earlier. i admire his Real Thing, as you said -- & i think i agree if u mean a certain sincerity re otherwise embarrassing sentiment -- w/o being self-conscious.

sniffle,
hassen